I whisper your name (ayradyss) wrote,
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One Black Feather

This is a link because it's formatted, and long. This is also a link because it's a hard subject. If you're easily offended, don't read it.
Clarabear, this is the story I was stuck on for so long, and I don't know if I ended it right or well or not yet.
I don't know if the ending works...but it is an ending, which is better than none. But I need to know whether it's done, whether the ending works, whether it belongs. It was written so long after the rest of the story that I don't know if the style fits even.
Does it?
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